Comments on: Reclaimer: Chapter Two, Part Twelve - Phantoms

By: John Kenyon.

John Kenyon. — Thu, 03 Jan 2008 00:20:55 +0000

Yay! Thankis Louis! It clicks! I actualy think I like this way better.

By: Jim (TTL Demag0gue)

Jim (TTL Demag0gue) — Wed, 02 Jan 2008 11:59:10 +0000

re: Louis Wu – Makes sense. That’ll teach me to try to get fancy with the layouts. :)

Note to self: Rows = better than offset panels. Check.

By: Louis Wu

Louis Wu — Wed, 02 Jan 2008 11:39:46 +0000

I had the same problem John did – but upon re-reading, it’s an order thing, not a missing panel.

Seems like the reading order is supposed to be Left 1 -> Right 1 -> Right 2 -> Left 2 -> Left 3 -> Right 3.

Which is fine – except they don’t actually FLOW that way. ;) (I mean, it kinda does, with the whole ‘go with the highest panel that isn’t read’ thing… but arrows might actually help.)

By: Jim (TTL Demag0gue)

Jim (TTL Demag0gue) — Wed, 02 Jan 2008 11:04:08 +0000

re: John Kenyon. – Where does the dialogue break down for you?

By: John Kenyon.

John Kenyon. — Wed, 02 Jan 2008 08:21:25 +0000

Yay! Your back! Happy New Year!

I think your missing a pannel though… the dialog is a little.. off? I dont know, I cant put my finger on it. Oh well.