Comments on: Reclaimer: Chapter Three, Part Ten - Problems

By: Jim (TTL Demag0gue)

Jim (TTL Demag0gue) — Wed, 12 Mar 2008 01:54:07 +0000

You’re relentless, Kenyon! Always demanding quality? What’s up with that? :)

I’ll mind the details a little better in the future, eh? ;)

By: John Kenyon

John Kenyon — Tue, 11 Mar 2008 02:19:26 +0000

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I see what your getting at, but agian, it takes how long to lay a weapon against a wall and out from under foot? A second or so? And for all the weapons that are visible in the comic, Id say it would take maybe ten minutes to do. This is prolly me just being picky anyway.

By: HeavenlyYeti

HeavenlyYeti — Mon, 10 Mar 2008 15:50:31 +0000

“John Kenyon. Says:

March 10th, 2008 at 2:55 am
YaY! New comic! I think I like where this is going.

Now, on to the complai- um, comments?

I only have one issue. The weapons and munitions you have strewn about the base. I like the effort of putting them there, intentional or not. BUT, these spartains are high quality troops right? And all of the Navel dudes I know are verry anal about keeping things neat. So haveing that stuff all messy, and not nice and neatly put up for easy reach and storage seems at odds for who and what the men are.

Ok, Im done, I realy liked this one by the way, its just that I allways need to find something wrong, and try and correct it. Sorryâ€¦”

I think that he’s trying to convey the snese that it is all rushed and it certainly adds that extra layer of depth, I think, and is very suggestive of the mood.

By: John Kenyon.

John Kenyon. — Mon, 10 Mar 2008 06:55:35 +0000

YaY! New comic! I think I like where this is going.

Now, on to the complai- um, comments?

I only have one issue. The weapons and munitions you have strewn about the base. I like the effort of putting them there, intentional or not. BUT, these spartains are high quality troops right? And all of the Navel dudes I know are verry anal about keeping things neat. So haveing that stuff all messy, and not nice and neatly put up for easy reach and storage seems at odds for who and what the men are.

Ok, Im done, I realy liked this one by the way, its just that I allways need to find something wrong, and try and correct it. Sorry…