This week is the first time I’ve been able to complete all three pages in a single afternoon. It helps, of course, that I’ve been working on scripting right along, so actually putting everything together goes much more quickly and smoothly.
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There is a grammatical error in the second to last panel. “Archimedes is a powerful and dangerous, especially in the hands of such as viper.’ I’m assuming the ‘a’ was inintentional, and the second part just sounds awkward.
The emergency boot cycle must have had some adverse effects, all those displays are BSODing lol. Ferial’s apparent duplicity is confusing and intriguing at the same time.
Every comic… the art just looks slicker. I don’t know if you’ve been fiddling with the filters but great job with that! Also, obviously, the story is great. Yay!
Orphans, I corrected the grammatical error. The ‘awkward’ phrase, however, I’m leaving as is. It is grammatically correct and is demonstrative of the way a construct like this AI thinks.
ArK, unfortunately, there aren’t any computers provided in Forge that have anything but the blue screen. Somewhat aggravating, but I work with what I have, y’know?
Thanks, Elnea. I actually haven’t twiddled with the filters in quite some time. I’m pretty happy with the effect I’ve been using. I do, however, try to be creative with the shots I take. I’m glad you’re enjoying it so much!
Ah, just a slight error with a sentence. In the top right frame, the A.I. says “Certain of my data streams remain active[...]”
I think you left out “parts” between “certain” and “of”.
Mavoc: Nope, I didn’t. That, too, is correct grammar, if not popularly used.
Really? Curious…
bludgeon! well it does 1 hit kill in melee:P
was that a oddball victimization?