Don’t forget about the Reclaimer Comic Contest! I’ve still only received four entries, and there are just 10 days remaining in the contest. So, make sure you get those comics done and turned in by midnight (EDT) on Monday, October 6!
Another great comic, but the way the word bubbles and comic panels are arranged had me confused for a minute, reading them out of order makes it so confusing.
Jim, I spy two mistakes already, both in the lower left panel. I think there should be a question mark at the end of the first sentence, and the second sentence should say “will we be able” not “will be able”
Great comic Jim. the panels are not that hard to follow. However; if you went back to lining each box up instead of over-lapping, I beleive the confusion will go way. But to each his own, Jesus couldn’t please his 12 Diciples, how are you going to please the world. So whats going on with our friend Ferial, haven’t heard from him in awhile?
its great…i think the layout of the panels is fine, but the layout of the bubbles does get hard to follow properly, but i believe no matter which way you read them the comic still makes sense…i like the comic though, it doesnt really add much to forward the story, but its great none the less!
@ TrAvIs 6t6 – I think it was primarily the word balloons in the penultimate panel that made things so confusing. I’ve redone that section, so it should be more easily readable.
@ the silver fox – You’re absolutely right. Thanks for catching those. They’ve been fixed.
@ Spartana – The Reclaimer has some 1337 hacking skillz.
@ PikminGod – Yeah, I fixed the section that I think was creating the most confusion. I fell into the same mistake that I complain that so many other webcomics writers make. Let me know if it reads a little better now.
I must say that the layout now is exceptional. I was not able to see the old version, but this one is grand. Also, I noticed the comics are focusing on one story line for a longer period than before. Is this a reaction to some of the pervious comments?
Maybe Jim was sleepy when he put this one together the first time…
Anyway, I have a new forum post up! Be sure to check it out. This is the first one where you (might) have enough information to guess who the speaker is. If you read James Patterson.
As for the corrections, It gets to the point where something is so good for so long that you look for the mistakes more than anything else. Consider it a compliment : ]
Another great comic, but the way the word bubbles and comic panels are arranged had me confused for a minute, reading them out of order makes it so confusing.
Jim, I spy two mistakes already, both in the lower left panel. I think there should be a question mark at the end of the first sentence, and the second sentence should say “will we be able” not “will be able”
I got a little confused with the layout too and it would seem that RC has a darker side…
Great work though Jim!
the layout confused me to. random bubbles in randomm frames :S
anyways top work!
Great comic Jim. the panels are not that hard to follow. However; if you went back to lining each box up instead of over-lapping, I beleive the confusion will go way. But to each his own, Jesus couldn’t please his 12 Diciples, how are you going to please the world. So whats going on with our friend Ferial, haven’t heard from him in awhile?
Another great one, Jim. I followed it fairly well.
Hmmm… I may even have written an FF on this without knowing.
its great…i think the layout of the panels is fine, but the layout of the bubbles does get hard to follow properly, but i believe no matter which way you read them the comic still makes sense…i like the comic though, it doesnt really add much to forward the story, but its great none the less!
@ TrAvIs 6t6 – I think it was primarily the word balloons in the penultimate panel that made things so confusing. I’ve redone that section, so it should be more easily readable.
@ the silver fox – You’re absolutely right. Thanks for catching those. They’ve been fixed.
@ Spartana – The Reclaimer has some 1337 hacking skillz.
@ PikminGod – Yeah, I fixed the section that I think was creating the most confusion. I fell into the same mistake that I complain that so many other webcomics writers make. Let me know if it reads a little better now.
“Oh, that won’t be a problem”
I must say that the layout now is exceptional. I was not able to see the old version, but this one is grand. Also, I noticed the comics are focusing on one story line for a longer period than before. Is this a reaction to some of the pervious comments?
good edit…reads better now…i was reading it in the wrong order
Jim, you said he was a 1337 H4X0R. How can he not understand what the Calvacada’s technobabble is about. raises eybrows
And, why is the Calvacada’s text not purple!? You didn’t take my suggestion for a purple Calvacada, did you? T.T
Also, the bold Reclaimer’s text is really… blurring together. It is kinda hard to tell what letter a character is forming.
@st33med: i think it spelled cavalcada
@jim: great comic love the layout i wonder what ferial is up to though.
who would of thought a literal A.I.
not trying to spoil anything but dont you think most of the comic’s fans are dedicated to finding your mistakes jim?
Call it constructive criticism
And it’s just because Jim is such a good writer we can’t help ourselves
lol
Maybe Jim was sleepy when he put this one together the first time…
Anyway, I have a new forum post up! Be sure to check it out. This is the first one where you (might) have enough information to guess who the speaker is. If you read James Patterson.
The comic is not yet error-less! look in the first baloon on the top right. The last sentence needs a period!
As for the corrections, It gets to the point where something is so good for so long that you look for the mistakes more than anything else. Consider it a compliment : ]