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Col Burke: Just out of curiosity, how was the flow? I wrote them knowing that there’d be a span of time between each, so I’m curious how they read together.
Matoro3311: Spelling error? I don’t see no stinking spelling error. whistles and walks away nonchalantly
A trilogy of monolog comics? sounds like the climax is comming soon.
Only thing left is to wait.
Hmm… Insatiable used twice makes this comic sound repedetive.
By the way, the flow of the three sounds good; the topic stays on course, the same tone is used throughout, and asteticly beautiful backgrounds all tie it in.
Great ending to the trilogy of monolog comics, well find out if it’s to love after the weekend. Don’t the weekends usually fly by anyway? It’s almost like our society (What happend to I before E, except after C?) has combined them into one day that seems like a normal day, but I digress.
Yes, the flow works well. The elements are the same from comic to comic and the direction doesn’t take any sudden turns.
Once more, brilliant work, Jim. However, I’m not sure how I feel about the second-to-last dialogue box, in the last panel? I stumbled over that about 5 times and I still don’t think I get it. Could you explain what was being said? And you may want to rephrase it a bit…
Oh, and Nevets? The I-before-E stuff isn’t even really a rule… There are more exceptions to that rule than there are instances where it applies.
Wow im new to your series but i just finished reading all of them and i have to comment WOW!!! ur a great writer. and its killin me to now have to wait for monday.
@Sangheilioz: It tripped me up at first, but here’s what I think it means: Neither humans nor covenant have an adequate grasp of what they possess (technology/knowledge) to protect them from whatever may be coming, as the Forerunner did.
I think I am going to love what comes next. And, should unification bring to mind theories like the Omega Point or am I just reaching a little too far?
DeathGrunty – If that’s the case, then there is some way to defend against what is coming? What’s more, the humans and the covenant races both have the ability to use this defense, whatever it may be? That leads me to believe that this “defense” is not technological, but biological, and something that all sentient species share… Something of the mind?
Of course, this is all assuming we interpreted what Jim wrote correctly… You’re a cryptic bastard, Jim, and I love/hate you for it.
(Not that line again!)
You know, for some reason, I don’t think we’re going to love this part…
More monologue, hopefully we will see a way of defeating the egotistical maniac
i love AI’S i wish i had one for my computer, live would be so much more intresting.
I’m believing that the entity who’s talking is Ferial.
“You’re going to love this part”
Sound of pants unzipping
Somehow i don’t think that’s what Jim has in mind
Oh come on Jim, really? With the “Your Going to love this Part”? Over the weekend now we have to wait. Shame on you Jim, Shame on you…
But I can’t wait to find out what that is? Well Played.
PikminGod: Oh, no. Certainly not.
spillits: I aim to please.
Good stuff Jim!
Dang you for making me wait over the weekend, yeesh!
Nice tie-in with the Halo storyline there.
Breaking the 4th wall, very brave of you Jim. My perspective of this monologue entity has shifted to it being more of a narrator than a protagonist.
Good work Jim, I waited and read the last three comics at once. I am really glad I did!
“Forefunners”? Might need to fix that.
Shu Sam Chen (HSAR): Thanks. The Reclaimerverse is similar to the original Haloverse in most ways. I’m just putting a new spin on things.
BladedFish: Oh, just you wait. It gets better.
Col Burke: Just out of curiosity, how was the flow? I wrote them knowing that there’d be a span of time between each, so I’m curious how they read together.
Matoro3311: Spelling error? I don’t see no stinking spelling error. whistles and walks away nonchalantly
Biology… Hrm…
Probably this guy is not biotic?
Thinks that this could be a monitor
A trilogy of monolog comics? sounds like the climax is comming soon.
Only thing left is to wait.
Hmm… Insatiable used twice makes this comic sound repedetive.
By the way, the flow of the three sounds good; the topic stays on course, the same tone is used throughout, and asteticly beautiful backgrounds all tie it in.
The flow was really good. I think it worked much better and made more sense reading in one sitting than it would have in three parts.
Gah.. Damn you. You’re too good at suspense… especially knowing that we have to wait till monday to find out more.
Great ending to the trilogy of monolog comics, well find out if it’s to love after the weekend. Don’t the weekends usually fly by anyway? It’s almost like our society (What happend to I before E, except after C?) has combined them into one day that seems like a normal day, but I digress.
Yes, the flow works well. The elements are the same from comic to comic and the direction doesn’t take any sudden turns.
Now to patiently for the super day to end.
@ Nevets91: the ‘i’ and the ‘e’ in ‘society’ are pronouced separately. Compare to ‘receive’.
Once more, brilliant work, Jim. However, I’m not sure how I feel about the second-to-last dialogue box, in the last panel? I stumbled over that about 5 times and I still don’t think I get it. Could you explain what was being said? And you may want to rephrase it a bit…
Oh, and Nevets? The I-before-E stuff isn’t even really a rule… There are more exceptions to that rule than there are instances where it applies.
Wow im new to your series but i just finished reading all of them and i have to comment WOW!!! ur a great writer. and its killin me to now have to wait for monday.
Mendicant Bias?
@Sangheilioz: It tripped me up at first, but here’s what I think it means: Neither humans nor covenant have an adequate grasp of what they possess (technology/knowledge) to protect them from whatever may be coming, as the Forerunner did.
Key Master Edit: Let’s keep it clean, please, and knock it off with the crude comments.
I must say i normally do not like these but after reading all of these so far i am enjoying them keep them comming.
I’m back, and I feel like I’m gonna love this part!
I think I am going to love what comes next. And, should unification bring to mind theories like the Omega Point or am I just reaching a little too far?
120 and going strong. Keep up the good work.
apocalypse now! ...well, actually, soon! reclaimers love the smell of eerie narrators in the evening. smells like… confused and anxious fans!
uno mas, buena trabaja!
DeathGrunty – If that’s the case, then there is some way to defend against what is coming? What’s more, the humans and the covenant races both have the ability to use this defense, whatever it may be? That leads me to believe that this “defense” is not technological, but biological, and something that all sentient species share… Something of the mind?
Of course, this is all assuming we interpreted what Jim wrote correctly… You’re a cryptic bastard, Jim, and I love/hate you for it.
Sangheilioz: Everyone always does.
Was I at least right in the interpretation?
Gravemind